g-spot
i somehow lost my spine
swallowed much too much
melting into a twisted, salacious vine
my backbone
---slowly fused to the depths
of some G-spot in my throat,
swallowing much too much---
lays in a yard somewhere
between here and him and alone
Stumble It!
posted by brokenpoetrygirl at 9:15 AM
10 Comments:
nice but troubling--it leaves me wiht the sense that you're lonely after giving a wonderful gift. The pic goes well with the poem.
you posted again!
...hmm. interesting. not what it means to me at all actually. guess that's what poetry is, though...left for interpretation or misinterpretation.
What does the poem mean to you?
well, i wrote it...it was what i was feeling at the time. i'd rather save my interpretation for me...what's important to you is how it made you feel. whether it meshes with how i intended it's meaning or not, ya know?
and why are you anonymous?
The backbone shivers
The thigh quivers
Here, seen close to rapture,
The girl contrives my soul to capture.
I would that these words
and sights of pleasantry be
not so distant. And your breath
and smell recumbent near me.
that was not only very good.
muddybanks42
yeah
Leaves me with a sense of spent passion, a little bit salacious, lovely to read.
thanks for all your comments...and lime & tequila: thanks for using my favorite word "salacious"...this was the first time i ever got to use this word in a poem, and i loved every salacious moment of it *wink*
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