heads
funny how
you can just turn on me like a dime
and i'm left blinded by the glare
of the shiny backside of your untrustworthy
head
Stumble It!
you can just turn on me like a dime
and i'm left blinded by the glare
of the shiny backside of your untrustworthy
head
Stumble It!
posted by brokenpoetrygirl at 9:18 AM
8 Comments:
I love it!
You make me want to hate this guy with the bald, shiny head, too!
Untrustworthy *&^(^%&^*!
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I may be wrong, but has it not been said that follically challenged gentlemen are extremely peurile ?
or does that rule only apply to homosapiens with arse shaped craniums .
I like it. I'm not sure what to say, because I've never been good at disecting what a poet is writing about, but it seems to be about money, but it could also be a metaphor about an x-boyfriend. I could be all together wrong. Let me know if I am close.
A Most Excellent Site.
Thank you.
Aileni.
*laughing* this tiny little poem seems to have had a lot of impact;)
dylan: you frickin' kill me, dude!
ferdc: don't be a hater! *wink*
rick: it's not about money or an ex-bf...OR a bald guy.
it just hit me one morning, inspired by feeling thrown for a loop by someone's swift-shifting mood. how one minute they can be all lovey, and then the next as cold as ice. sometimes all in the same breath.
the "glare" is from that turn on the dime "mood." i guess is what i meant.
thanks for all the comments!!! :)
more please!
xoxo
elayne
I don't like him! You have managed to strike the perfect balance of sympathy/disgust in me. I like it in all it's simplicity.
Gimme A Dream @ Spicypage
funny how
I checked the results for "poetry"
on bloglog.com
and,
was I blinded by hope?
Your blog was the only one our of the
few--30 something--
that actually had a poem on.
---
it's a pity you don't post more often.
I like this,
the "shiny backside of your
untrustworthy head."
ha ha ha
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