Monday, November 19, 2007

heads

funny how
you can just turn on me like a dime
and i'm left blinded by the glare
of the shiny backside of your untrustworthy
head
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8 Comments:

Blogger Ferd said...

I love it!
You make me want to hate this guy with the bald, shiny head, too!
Untrustworthy *&^(^%&^*!

10:17 PM  
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10:18 PM  
Blogger Unknown said...

I may be wrong, but has it not been said that follically challenged gentlemen are extremely peurile ?
or does that rule only apply to homosapiens with arse shaped craniums .

11:37 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

I like it. I'm not sure what to say, because I've never been good at disecting what a poet is writing about, but it seems to be about money, but it could also be a metaphor about an x-boyfriend. I could be all together wrong. Let me know if I am close.

9:05 AM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

A Most Excellent Site.
Thank you.
Aileni.

4:36 AM  
Blogger brokenpoetrygirl said...

*laughing* this tiny little poem seems to have had a lot of impact;)

dylan: you frickin' kill me, dude!
ferdc: don't be a hater! *wink*
rick: it's not about money or an ex-bf...OR a bald guy.

it just hit me one morning, inspired by feeling thrown for a loop by someone's swift-shifting mood. how one minute they can be all lovey, and then the next as cold as ice. sometimes all in the same breath.

the "glare" is from that turn on the dime "mood." i guess is what i meant.

thanks for all the comments!!! :)
more please!

xoxo
elayne

12:21 PM  
Blogger Magdalen Islands said...

I don't like him! You have managed to strike the perfect balance of sympathy/disgust in me. I like it in all it's simplicity.
Gimme A Dream @ Spicypage

2:14 AM  
Blogger r_i_d said...

funny how
I checked the results for "poetry"
on bloglog.com
and,
was I blinded by hope?
Your blog was the only one our of the
few--30 something--
that actually had a poem on.

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it's a pity you don't post more often.

I like this,
the "shiny backside of your
untrustworthy head."

ha ha ha

3:58 PM  

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